Tuesday, January 18, 2005

This is Why They Pay Me

Original sentence:



Several specified functions within the ABC Systems Software system cannot be fully accessed by those users to whom the applicable permissions have not been assigned.



My knee-jerk rewrite:



Not all users can access all functions in ABC Systems Software.



It may get tweaked a bit more, but geez ... passive voice really sucks sometimes.



I know this is a lame blog entry, but I just wanted to let you, my faithful (if imagined) reading public, know what I'm doing instead of blogging.



Pity the poor cubicle dweller.

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